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Reavenbroke
Posted on: 2014/4/9 4:46

Joined: 2014/2/17
From: Pittsburgh
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Papers and Research Things
I figured, a lot of people on here are going through college/ graduating high school/ or returning to college for a higher degree.
In which, that means there's quite a lot of papers that get written, and sometimes you need a hand checking over them and getting ideas.

(Pretty sure this is a general thing, not trashcan stuff, so i put it in general topics?)

but yea, this can be a pretty helpful thing for students, especially since we can get ideas from all over the world, from different personalities, and people with different experiences- this can really open peoples eyes.
Reavenbroke
Posted on: 2014/4/9 4:48

Joined: 2014/2/17
From: Pittsburgh
Posts: 43
Re: Papers and Research Things
Also, here is my current paper on The Mind of a Psychopath.

Rea's paper
Whisky
Posted on: 2014/4/23 22:38

Joined: 2011/5/25
From: SouthWest UK
Posts: 2392
Re: Papers and Research Things
Sorry Reaven, I've been meaning to have a read.

I'll have a look and offer some critique if you'd like.


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Reavenbroke
Posted on: 2014/4/27 2:34

Joined: 2014/2/17
From: Pittsburgh
Posts: 43
Re: Papers and Research Things
paper was long subbmited. XD got a B-
Whisky
Posted on: 2014/4/27 11:20

Joined: 2011/5/25
From: SouthWest UK
Posts: 2392
Re: Papers and Research Things
No worries, I can give you a review in retrospect. Maybe we an push you to an A for you next paper ;)

(I stupidly passionate about learning and the dissemination of information)


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Reavenbroke
Posted on: 2014/4/27 20:57

Joined: 2014/2/17
From: Pittsburgh
Posts: 43
Re: Papers and Research Things
im 100% okay with this.
criticism is good for your health... i think.
Whisky
Posted on: 2014/5/11 11:56

Joined: 2011/5/25
From: SouthWest UK
Posts: 2392
Re: Papers and Research Things
Ok, I've given the paper a once over. Take on board what you will. If you want to go away, make changes and then submit it again I'll happily go over it again.

It might look like I went crazy with the red pen but overall it's not a bad paper, with a little practice I think you could easily be getting those As. Depending on your lecturer they might even be willing to remark the revised paper for you (of course it's not going to count to your grade but a good lecturer should be eager if you are willing to learn and further yourself)

View Doc here.

To anyone else that wants me to go over their papers I'd be happy to. Just bare in mind I have a life and it might take me some time to get to it. So don't expect me respond well to "Whisky! I need to hand this in tomorrow can you look please!" lol.


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